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Text from brainfruit - English

  • A dream

  • Fog.
  • A big white cloud.
  • I can't see anything.
  • But slowly and smoothly the cloud disappear....
  • Far under me there is land. A island.
  • The coastline surrounds a big wide greenfield with small hills and valleys.
  • The sun is shining...
  • Why am I in the air? Am I flying? I don't know.
  • But it doesn't matter.
  • I do not feel fear.
  • I'm feeling well.
  • And I'm overwhelmed by the beauty I'm seeing.
  • The air smells fresh and sweet.
  • Also I do not feel a body.
  • I have all of my senses, except any kind of sense of touch.
  • I can not realize some kind of boundary between myself and my surroundings.
  • When I see a blade of grass, I can be that blade, feel the wind which is swinging me around....

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English