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從Niclo來的文本 - English

Niclo's day
Today he wants to practice English's conjunctions: Instead of only writing about his day or something like that.
He likes doing it, though.
Regardless of what he says, I will tell you he's been studying English for a while, but not as much as he wanted.
He enjoys wasting his time reading books, up to 6 in a year.
Hardly ever he watches TV Shows.
He'd rather studies World's history -he's by far a whiz in that-.
By the way i said he would go telling us something about English's conjunctions, right?
Well he had to go a few minutes ago.
Furthermore, This text needs to be tiny.
I will have to curb my thoughts.
Thanks for reading.

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- Niclo's day
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句子 1
- Today he wants to practice English's conjunctions: Instead of only writing about his day or something like that.
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句子 2
- He likes doing it, though.
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句子 3
- Regardless of what he says, I will tell you he's been studying English for a while, but not as much as he wanted.
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句子 4
- He enjoys wasting his time reading books, up to 6 in a year.
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句子 5
- Hardly ever he watches TV Shows.
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句子 6
- He'd rather studies World's history -he's by far a whiz in that-.
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句子 7
- By the way i said he would go telling us something about English's conjunctions, right?
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句子 8
- Well he had to go a few minutes ago.
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句子 9
- Furthermore, This text needs to be tiny.
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句子 10
- I will have to curb my thoughts.
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句子 11
- Thanks for reading.
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