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My learning goal
Hi everyone, I am so excited to join you, because of it's my first time in a website like this one.
I hope to improve my english skills, and I would like to become in a professional translator, working in many places, even I would like working on abroad.
That's the reason by which I'm here.
I hope to know you, and exchange different views about our learning ways.

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- My learning goal
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문장 1
- Hi everyone, I am so excited to join you, because of it's my first time in a website like this one.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I hope to improve my english skills, and I would like to become in a professional translator, working in many places, even I would like working on abroad.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- That's the reason by which I'm here.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
문장 4
- I hope to know you, and exchange different views about our learning ways.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4