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Street Clash
It was July, 27.
I was walking home through the park.
Suddenly I heard vague noise ahead.
I ran and saw a big clash.
Street vendors jumped out of the stalls and were fighting with police.
Policemen with batons were trying to stop this outbreak, but only warning shot could crackdown on fight.

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- Street Clash
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câu 1
- It was July, 27.
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câu 2
- I was walking home through the park.
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câu 3
- Suddenly I heard vague noise ahead.
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câu 4
- I ran and saw a big clash.
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câu 5
- Street vendors jumped out of the stalls and were fighting with police.
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câu 6
- Policemen with batons were trying to stop this outbreak, but only warning shot could crackdown on fight.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6