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My Favorite Person I Meet
One day i was meeting my favorite person in coffee .I was meeting him 3 years ago .Before i graduate of high school .His name is Ali .
First thing i was doing ,I was requesting water and coffee to him and invite him to site with me .He accepts my order.
That day i was so happy and can't believe .Anyway, that day is best day for me .

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- One day i was meeting my favorite person in coffee .I was meeting him 3 years ago .Before i graduate of high school .His name is Ali .
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- First thing i was doing ,I was requesting water and coffee to him and invite him to site with me .He accepts my order.
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- That day i was so happy and can't believe .Anyway, that day is best day for me .
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3