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Text from jimsalsa - English

  • One semester in Thailand

  • Hey everybody, I am currently applying for an exchange program in a thai University.
  • In order to complete my application form, I had to write a brief statement explaining my motivation.
  • I would really appreciate if you could read what I wrote and help me correct the mistakes I made.
  • I really appreciate your help, Thank you!
  • My name is Tim XXX and I am currently a student of Thai and Chinese Studies and International Relations at the Insitut National des Langues Civilisations Orientales (INaLCO) in Paris.
  • Having already been given the opportunity to participate in an one-year exchange program to Bangkok in 2010, my objective when enrolling at INaLCO was to further deepen my prior knowledge of the thai culture and language.
  • My studies helped me acquire a better understanding of the thai society and to learn more about its historic and civilisationnel foundations.
  • The intensive language classes allowed me to improve my command of the thai langage so that I am now capable of reading literary texts and news articles as well as understanding radio programs on a diversity of topics in thai.
  • Nevertheless, I still find it difficult to read scientific texts written in thai, not only because of the language barrier but also because I sometimes struggle to grasp the thai concepts and scientific references.
  • As I would like to pursue my studies in the field of international relations between South-East Asia and Europe, I think that it is indispensable for me to have an in-depth understanding of the thai language and the local cultural codes in order to be able to conduct meaningful research in social sciences related to South-East Asia.
  • Studying at Thammasat University would be a great opportunity to achieve my goal of developing my langage skills and of familiarizing with the academic environment and could thus lay a solid groundwork for a further engagement in studies of region.

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    • My name is Tim XXX and I am currently a student of Thai and Chinese Studies and International Relations at the Insitut National des Langues Civilisations Orientales (INaLCO) in Paris.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 5
  • Sentence 6
    • Having already been given the opportunity to participate in an one-year exchange program to Bangkok in 2010, my objective when enrolling at INaLCO was to further deepen my prior knowledge of the thai culture and language.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 6
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    • My studies helped me acquire a better understanding of the thai society and to learn more about its historic and civilisationnel foundations.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • The intensive language classes allowed me to improve my command of the thai langage so that I am now capable of reading literary texts and news articles as well as understanding radio programs on a diversity of topics in thai.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
    • Nevertheless, I still find it difficult to read scientific texts written in thai, not only because of the language barrier but also because I sometimes struggle to grasp the thai concepts and scientific references.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • As I would like to pursue my studies in the field of international relations between South-East Asia and Europe, I think that it is indispensable for me to have an in-depth understanding of the thai language and the local cultural codes in order to be able to conduct meaningful research in social sciences related to South-East Asia.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • Studying at Thammasat University would be a great opportunity to achieve my goal of developing my langage skills and of familiarizing with the academic environment and could thus lay a solid groundwork for a further engagement in studies of region.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Sentence 11