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Text from LeoNazul - English

  • Hi! nice to meet you

  • My name is Leo, i´m from Mexico Today one of my friends view some people eat pizza and he go whit them and ask them if share pizza whit him, the people vary kind say yes and gift one slice of pizza.
  • this is my first text for correction, please tell me how i could be better

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English