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  • I have to tell you something, i´m searching something about piece, the life isn´t easy but the moment is now, when you see the sunshine, when you see the sky, someone can´t see the same ain smell, and don´t imagine my life in a office because i feel that the humans aren´t in this life for lost time, for simply money, i don´t want say that the money isn´t important but the people use this paper for performance a perfect life, but only lie himself, try to be accept, for a crazy humanity, use your talent to make better the life of other people, enjoy the presents that can come to your life and i don´t say scape to your family or your friends, or the civilization but be really happy don´t make the bad to other people and your simply life turn in wonderful, every day learn of animals, children, old people, and remember smile.

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    • I have to tell you something, i´m searching something about piece, the life isn´t easy but the moment is now, when you see the sunshine, when you see the sky, someone can´t see the same ain smell, and don´t imagine my life in a office because i feel that the humans aren´t in this life for lost time, for simply money, i don´t want say that the money isn´t important but the people use this paper for performance a perfect life, but only lie himself, try to be accept, for a crazy humanity, use your talent to make better the life of other people, enjoy the presents that can come to your life and i don´t say scape to your family or your friends, or the civilization but be really happy don´t make the bad to other people and your simply life turn in wonderful, every day learn of animals, children, old people, and remember smile.
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