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Text from StanislavFirst - English

  • It’s like in Stephen King’s books. Part 2

  • He told everything and he led me to his aunt.
  • When we went into aunt’s room we saw she was lying on the sofa that was in the corner of the room.
  • She had been lying on the sofa for twelve hour since night.
  • There was a small table in front of the sofa and where were much kind of drugs.
  • He came to her and talked to her gently.
  • He loved his aunt very much.
  • But destiny of anyone is unpredictable.
  • In some hour she died.
  • She was only fifty five and she had many ideas and plans.
  • She wanted to be a grandmother or to see nephew’s children at least.
  • But her dreams weren’t meant to come true.
  • I remember him staying at her bed.
  • He didn’t cry like a real man.
  • But now I realize what meant his composure.
  • His aunt’s death changed him and then I understand — he is another man, not that laughing boy from my childhood.

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