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Hi, I am new here.
Hi guys, my name is Miguel, I'm 21 years old and I want learn english with you.
I want learn this lenguaje because the next years I go to EEUU for study social work.
Always I like me help the people that they are in exclusion social, as I think that they are equal that us, only that they had less luck that us in your life.
I hope that you help me now.
Thank so much guys. See you soon.

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- Hi, I am new here.
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câu 1
- Hi guys, my name is Miguel, I'm 21 years old and I want learn english with you.
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câu 2
- I want learn this lenguaje because the next years I go to EEUU for study social work.
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câu 3
- Always I like me help the people that they are in exclusion social, as I think that they are equal that us, only that they had less luck that us in your life.
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câu 4
- I hope that you help me now.
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câu 5
- Thank so much guys. See you soon.
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