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  • Vocation in Montenegro

  • During the last summer,I keep a lot of interesting things and nice memorise from the same.
  • I was in Montenegro,where I met a lot of people from the whole world.
  • But the most interesting persons were one couple of which I learned a lot about life and adventures.I met them suddenly on the Ship which direction were from Italy to Montenegro.
  • It was very nice couple,I didn' ask them for the ages,because we were on the deck around 2 hours and we've talked just about traveling,experience,opportunities and life goals.
  • They were from England,and the've had a plan to take a trip around the world for a whole year, with a less or almost without money.When I heard that.I thought they joked me because it was first time that I saw someone in that level brave and avanturistic!
  • I've been already interested about that people lives,what they doing,which experience had they before and what is plan of them for future after traveling.
  • They were so open mindet to me,so polite and so kind that I was so glad to met people like them.When we reach the coast of Monteregro they taked of a trip in other direction from me (Direction toward Albania) and I take a way to Budva in opposite way.
  • I was asked them for a facebook,mail,phone number or something,and they didn't had anything,and I was wondering why or did I was bored or something!?
  • It was mistery,but,If they are exactly that they've told me,it was the most special persons that I've ever met.

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    • But the most interesting persons were one couple of which I learned a lot about life and adventures.I met them suddenly on the Ship which direction were from Italy to Montenegro.
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    • It was very nice couple,I didn' ask them for the ages,because we were on the deck around 2 hours and we've talked just about traveling,experience,opportunities and life goals.
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    • They were from England,and the've had a plan to take a trip around the world for a whole year, with a less or almost without money.When I heard that.I thought they joked me because it was first time that I saw someone in that level brave and avanturistic!
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    • I've been already interested about that people lives,what they doing,which experience had they before and what is plan of them for future after traveling.
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    • They were so open mindet to me,so polite and so kind that I was so glad to met people like them.When we reach the coast of Monteregro they taked of a trip in other direction from me (Direction toward Albania) and I take a way to Budva in opposite way.
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    • I was asked them for a facebook,mail,phone number or something,and they didn't had anything,and I was wondering why or did I was bored or something!?
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