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  • Hello my name is Carla

  • Hello my English is very bad,I need improve my level,I like this and is necessari for my jop in school of children's.The next desember I go to the New York in Connecticut,this live my aunt and my cousin,we are very good persons.I hope learn more English and meet more persons.thanks

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    • Hello my English is very bad,I need improve my level,I like this and is necessari for my jop in school of children's.The next desember I go to the New York in Connecticut,this live my aunt and my cousin,we are very good persons.I hope learn more English and meet more persons.thanks
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