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  • Letter of intent

  • Letter of intent The undersigned Hincu Lucia, originally from Republic of Moldova, 25 years old, I finished the Technical University of Moldova, I worked in areas such as sales consultant, woman cook, but these don't represent me.
  • I always wanted something more (...).
  • I noticed with interest the success of your business - founded in 1913 by Arnold Heinrich Deichmann in Essen city - leaders: Martin Fischer and Martin Heynen ~ approximately 36,150 people are employed in the company with a revenue of € 4.9 billion on year - with about 3,600 local shops in Germany and in 22 other European countries like Bulgaria, Italy, Austria, Poland, Romania, Czech Republic and more others...
  • The reason I am writing to you is because I would like to know if it is possible to put my services at your disposal to represent your company for sales in Moldova.
  • Because of our market isn't pronounced the product Deichmann, I wish to make it famous in RM for the prosperity of the enterprise and for my personal career development.
  • The opportunity for a discussion about how we could use the company's interests and mine at the same time would be welcome.
  • With respect Hincu Lucia

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  • Sentence 1
    • Letter of intent The undersigned Hincu Lucia, originally from Republic of Moldova, 25 years old, I finished the Technical University of Moldova, I worked in areas such as sales consultant, woman cook, but these don't represent me.
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  • Sentence 3
    • I noticed with interest the success of your business - founded in 1913 by Arnold Heinrich Deichmann in Essen city - leaders: Martin Fischer and Martin Heynen ~ approximately 36,150 people are employed in the company with a revenue of € 4.9 billion on year - with about 3,600 local shops in Germany and in 22 other European countries like Bulgaria, Italy, Austria, Poland, Romania, Czech Republic and more others...
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  • Sentence 4
    • The reason I am writing to you is because I would like to know if it is possible to put my services at your disposal to represent your company for sales in Moldova.
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  • Sentence 5
    • Because of our market isn't pronounced the product Deichmann, I wish to make it famous in RM for the prosperity of the enterprise and for my personal career development.
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  • Sentence 7