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Richard's sent me some birthday money for I buy a new DVD
Hi Richard. How are you?
Thank you for the present.
How you already know, I'm going to buy my favourite DVD called ''A monster came to see me'' because this film represent the most important things as mum's died. See you soon.

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- Richard's sent me some birthday money for I buy a new DVD
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi Richard. How are you?
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Thank you for the present.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- How you already know, I'm going to buy my favourite DVD called ''A monster came to see me'' because this film represent the most important things as mum's died. See you soon.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3