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Text von Bertilde - English

  • Life is just the same life

  • Now, I am at home living with my parents, i realize that the leisure time isn´t really for me, i am n´t used to do nothing at home.
  • I am feeling so weird about the leisure time.I hope not to fall depressed but be motivated to do something and being able to find a better job for me and being web designer professional.
  • I don´t know very much in english and i wanna improve every time my pronunciation and writing too.
  • I wanna study some web developer to join with designing.
  • I wanna go to Europe, to meet people, i like different cultures of Europe and i wanna understand people there, because just I am interested thanks for the amazing experience they have in the life.
  • Before quit at work three days ago, i was doing as web designer professionally, i liked very much it yet.
  • I prefer doing well the website with the truth passion with the people who trust me and feeling comfortable, but sometimes i asked myself why the truth passion is falling confused and lost slowly, just because the uncomfortable situation makes lost my trust passion, i will fix it out as soon as possible and I should n´t allow it ever to lost my truth passion doing website.
  • I love the art,the history,the science, the movies,i am n´t used to read something because in my mind does n´t stop thinking in new ideas or i can´t concentrate rarely.
  • I always wanna go away and learn everything all the time and going to Europe.
  • So, What do you think with my writing, it is bad or not, hope improve it every time, i wanna dominate the english language very soon! :) Citlalli

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    • I am feeling so weird about the leisure time.I hope not to fall depressed but be motivated to do something and being able to find a better job for me and being web designer professional.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 2
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    • I wanna go to Europe, to meet people, i like different cultures of Europe and i wanna understand people there, because just I am interested thanks for the amazing experience they have in the life.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 5
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    • I prefer doing well the website with the truth passion with the people who trust me and feeling comfortable, but sometimes i asked myself why the truth passion is falling confused and lost slowly, just because the uncomfortable situation makes lost my trust passion, i will fix it out as soon as possible and I should n´t allow it ever to lost my truth passion doing website.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 7
  • Satz 8
    • I love the art,the history,the science, the movies,i am n´t used to read something because in my mind does n´t stop thinking in new ideas or i can´t concentrate rarely.
      Jetzt abstimmen!
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
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