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Describe a class you have taken in school
For me the most important class in school was the English one, because of a couple of reasons.
The first one is that this class gave me necessary English knowledge, so I could feel comfortable when I went abroad for the first time.
And without this knowledge it would be quite impossible to ask the direction or to ask something I need.
Also, this class gave me an idea how to communicate to other people more properly, how to participate conversations.
Because of this class, I am good at public speech, and I don’t feel discomfort in front of big audience.
Thus, this class was the most important one for me in school.

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- For me the most important class in school was the English one, because of a couple of reasons.
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- The first one is that this class gave me necessary English knowledge, so I could feel comfortable when I went abroad for the first time.
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- And without this knowledge it would be quite impossible to ask the direction or to ask something I need.
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- Also, this class gave me an idea how to communicate to other people more properly, how to participate conversations.
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- Because of this class, I am good at public speech, and I don’t feel discomfort in front of big audience.
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- Thus, this class was the most important one for me in school.
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