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There were stars and the full moon that night.Lisbeth raised her head and saw Regul in Leo constellation close to the horizon.
She stopped pretty close to the Holel.
Suddenly she distinguished a shape of a man close to the water.
It was the first time Lisbeth saw a living soul after dark.
Although there was almost a hundred metres between them, she could easily identified the man who was illuminated by the moonlight.

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- There were stars and the full moon that night.Lisbeth raised her head and saw Regul in Leo constellation close to the horizon.
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- She stopped pretty close to the Holel.
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- Suddenly she distinguished a shape of a man close to the water.
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- It was the first time Lisbeth saw a living soul after dark.
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- Although there was almost a hundred metres between them, she could easily identified the man who was illuminated by the moonlight.
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