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  • As you all know thanks to my last article, I used to have an exchange with netherlands pupils.
  • One year after that, I was still keeping contact with my penpal, so we decided that each year, we will try to see each other.
  • So he invited me in July for one week in his country.
  • First, it was a little bit awkard : because of the time we were less closer than the last time, but the activities each day allowed us to find back our complicity.
  • The day after, we did some sight seeing tour in Maatricht, and went to a bar to drink a lemonade.
  • It was great fun because on the way to the bar, in the middleof the street, an old lady shouted at me from her windows.
  • I was really suprised by her initiative and it took me few seconds to understand that she just wanted to my friend and I post her letter in the mailbox several meters further.
  • So she throw her letter from her windows, and thank us for the service.
  • The rest of the week was wonderfull : I am definitely fond of Nethrlands.

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    • One year after that, I was still keeping contact with my penpal, so we decided that each year, we will try to see each other.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • First, it was a little bit awkard : because of the time we were less closer than the last time, but the activities each day allowed us to find back our complicity.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • It was great fun because on the way to the bar, in the middleof the street, an old lady shouted at me from her windows.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • I was really suprised by her initiative and it took me few seconds to understand that she just wanted to my friend and I post her letter in the mailbox several meters further.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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