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Hi !
I m Sophia and I live in Greece.
I have 3 kids and I work in a company with glasses.
I want very much to learn English , because i want to talk with other people and to visit other countries.
Sometimes I have to spoke English for my job and i feel very bad because i cant speak .
I need experience and to talk with other people that they can speak English very well.
Thanks a lot Sophia

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- I m Sophia and I live in Greece.
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- I need experience and to talk with other people that they can speak English very well.
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