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How did you spend in the party the last week?
Hi Michael.
It was so nice to hear from you.
Firstly, I extremely liked going to the party the last weekend because there are a lot of people and the music was very loud.
Moreover, everyone got drunk.
I spent a great day!
On the other hand, I met a nice girl and we were dancing and speaking together.
After, we were kissing for a short time.
Nowadays, we continue meeting and being a couple.
We fall in love.
I hope you all have a great weekend.

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- How did you spend in the party the last week?
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- Hi Michael.
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- It was so nice to hear from you.
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- Firstly, I extremely liked going to the party the last weekend because there are a lot of people and the music was very loud.
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- Moreover, everyone got drunk.
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- I spent a great day!
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- On the other hand, I met a nice girl and we were dancing and speaking together.
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- After, we were kissing for a short time.
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- Nowadays, we continue meeting and being a couple.
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- We fall in love.
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- I hope you all have a great weekend.
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