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  • Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.

  • Dog and fox The dog loved the fox so much.
  • They always play with each other.
  • One day, they met God.
  • God said: “ One of you will live and other one will die.
  • Both of you will play Scissors hammer paper.
  • Who lose will die.” Finally, the fox dead.
  • The dog hugged the fox and cried: “ I said both of us will take hammer.
  • Why while I took scissors, you took paper?” The dog wanted to lose to the fox can live.
  • It thought the fox will take hammer so it took scissors but the fox took paper because it thought the dog will take hammer.
  • This is the truth, the hearts of people in the society.
  • The fox was selfish and the dog was stupid.
  • But the society has an other side: When we harm other people, we harm us too.
  • Some people suffered the lose but they won.
  • So: keep friendly and nice, and you will win.
  • Live in the life, we must live good, friendly with other.
  • The right always point to the nice and friendly.
  • May be the fox suffered lose.
  • May be it knew the dog will take scissors so it took paper.
  • Both of them loved each other, but the fox dead before.
  • The fox and the dog were win.

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