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  • Fidel Castro's funerary

  • Fidel Castro's funerary urn began on Wednesday a trip of four days through Cuba, under the looks of hundreds of thousands of people greeting last time their "Comandante" at the edge of roads, hundreds of thousands of Cubans throw "Viva Fidel!" By shaking flags in the passage of the procession of seven vehicles, which has to cross 13 of 15 provinces of the island to join, Santiago de Cuba (is), where the rests of the former president died in 90 years will be buried on Sunday.
  • After two days of tributes on the place of the Revolution in Havana, ashes contained in a safe of cedar, wrapped with a Cuban flag are going to make in the opposite direction the route traveled by Fidel Castro at the time of the victory of its guerrilla warfare in 1959.
  • After Cienfuegos, the convoy has to make stage in Santa-Clara, where rest(base) ashes of a famous companion(journeyman) of Fidel Castro's fight(wrestling), Argentine Ernesto " Che " Guevara, died in 1967 In the term of about 1.000 km of trip, the rests of Fidel Castro will be buried on Sunday in the cemetery of Santa Ifigenia of Santiago, next to José Marti's ashes, hero of the independence of Cuba.
  • These burial will seal the end of the national mourning, decreed for nine days after its death announced on Friday evening by his brother and successor in the presidency(chair) Raul Castro.
  • This route follows the other way around that of the " Caravan of the freedom ", which from 2 till 8 January 1959 had led Fidel Castro to the meeting of the Cubans.
  • Criticized by the UNO for its mediocre balance sheet(assessment) regarding civil rights and regarding human rights, Fidel Castro remains worshipped by many Cubans, who underwent a real shock to the announcement of its death.

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    • Fidel Castro's funerary urn began on Wednesday a trip of four days through Cuba, under the looks of hundreds of thousands of people greeting last time their "Comandante" at the edge of roads, hundreds of thousands of Cubans throw "Viva Fidel!" By shaking flags in the passage of the procession of seven vehicles, which has to cross 13 of 15 provinces of the island to join, Santiago de Cuba (is), where the rests of the former president died in 90 years will be buried on Sunday.
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  • Sentence 2
    • After two days of tributes on the place of the Revolution in Havana, ashes contained in a safe of cedar, wrapped with a Cuban flag are going to make in the opposite direction the route traveled by Fidel Castro at the time of the victory of its guerrilla warfare in 1959.
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    • After Cienfuegos, the convoy has to make stage in Santa-Clara, where rest(base) ashes of a famous companion(journeyman) of Fidel Castro's fight(wrestling), Argentine Ernesto " Che " Guevara, died in 1967 In the term of about 1.000 km of trip, the rests of Fidel Castro will be buried on Sunday in the cemetery of Santa Ifigenia of Santiago, next to José Marti's ashes, hero of the independence of Cuba.
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    • These burial will seal the end of the national mourning, decreed for nine days after its death announced on Friday evening by his brother and successor in the presidency(chair) Raul Castro.
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    • This route follows the other way around that of the " Caravan of the freedom ", which from 2 till 8 January 1959 had led Fidel Castro to the meeting of the Cubans.
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    • Criticized by the UNO for its mediocre balance sheet(assessment) regarding civil rights and regarding human rights, Fidel Castro remains worshipped by many Cubans, who underwent a real shock to the announcement of its death.
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