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  • The percentage of poverty in the world is 10%, that people survive with less than 1'5€ per day, This happens in underdeveloped countries, like Africa, India or Pakistan.
  • Despite having resources they are poor; this is so because they have not received education, the most developed countries use them as chip workforce and sell the products obtained at cheap prices.

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    • The percentage of poverty in the world is 10%, that people survive with less than 1'5€ per day, This happens in underdeveloped countries, like Africa, India or Pakistan.
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    • Despite having resources they are poor; this is so because they have not received education, the most developed countries use them as chip workforce and sell the products obtained at cheap prices.
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