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  • About myself

  • Hello!
  • My name is Nursultan Gabbas.
  • I'm from Russia, Republick of Bashkortostan.
  • I live near Ufa city.
  • We are four of us: mother, father, little brother and me.
  • We live in a house with two floors and back garden.
  • Here three bedrooms, two living-rooms, one kitchen.
  • In our back garden we have 4 apple trees, cheary trees, currants, gooseberrys.
  • In summer period we plant tomatos, potatios, parsley, dill, radishes, squash, beets, onions, garlic, cucumbers, cabbage.
  • Also we have hens.
  • I graduated from unversity 2 years ago as geologist.
  • But I couldn't still find a job.
  • I don't know what to do with it.
  • I dream to go abroad to work as housekeeper or waiter and improve my spoken English.
  • Then I dream to pass IELTS and continue my study in geology in international universites.
  • But now it's only a dream, because here a lot of difficulties to go abroad.

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