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Text from almjhol - English

  • About Myself

  • Hello, my name is Blal I want talk about myself.
  • First, I live in Saudi Arabia specifically in Dmmam and I am 16 years old.
  • Second, I love love my family and always want help them.
  • The next thing, my hobbies is play football and swimming.
  • Also, sometime I spend my time at play computer.
  • However, when I will graduate I will be engineer.
  • Finally, I want try learning new hobbies.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English