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Text from IrinaSablina - English

  • the birth rate

  • In my opinion the birth rate will go down in 2017.
  • Factor which affect the change can be economic crisis.
  • In addition almost twice reduced the number of women able to give birth because of depopulation in the 90-ies.
  • The government could more attention be spent on economic well-being of the population.
  • Moreover it raised the issue of banning abortions.
  • Although I think it won't change the situation for the better.
  • In general the low fertility rate will have a negative impact on the development of my country.

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