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Text from IrinaSablina - English

  • the employment rate

  • In my opinion the employment rate will go down in 2017.
  • Factor which affect the change can be economic crisis in the course of which the Russians are losing their jobs.
  • The government could more attention be spent on economic well-being of the population.
  • Moreover it will continue to pay benefits to those who can't find work.
  • In general such events have a negative impact on the economy, because most will be living on social security of the state.

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