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Text from Tatiana1680 - English

  • Tourism in Russia.

  • Tourism is about travel, adventures and learning something new.
  • When you are traveling, you meet people; discover countries and traditions of different nations.
  • Today, according to UNWTO World Tourism Barometer, 561 million international tourists travel worldwide.
  • Can say that tourism is one of the best ways to spend a holiday.
  • Nowadays there are many means of travelling around the world and they are very comfortable.
  • Recently received a priority in the development of tourism in Russia.
  • Our country has a huge potential and opportunities to attract tourists from other countries.
  • But for many years it did not develop this area.
  • But in the last 10 years the situation has changed.
  • According to Russian Tourism, tourism in Russia is developing and growing.
  • Of course, that is happening slowly, but our country is trying to develop tourism.
  • Government stimulates the development of it.
  • Priority is domestic tourism.
  • Experts of Russian tourism say that domestic tourism increased 10-15 percent on this year. This is great!
  • On today can say that people prefer to travel around country.
  • According to experts, this is cheap way to spend a holiday.
  • Also, in this way leading package tour.
  • Russians visit another countries, where you can see the decline in tourist flow a few percent.
  • It connected with ability to pay of tourists.
  • For example, when you have little money, you find cheaper option of holiday than when you have much money.
  • Buy what interesting, in this tourist flow leading independent travel.
  • I believe, than our country continue to develop tourism.
  • I hope to contribute in this sphere.
  • It is interesting and attractive area for our country and need to develop it.
  • Tourism brings not only economic benefits, but also promotes our country and erase stereotypes about it.

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