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  • Please correct the story for me. Thank you very much.

  • There were two men who sitting next to each other, next to a river of America: A Vietnamese man and an American man.
  • They were fishing.
  • At first the two me achieved quick glances each other but no one said anything.
  • Same as all people when they had what they want, two men were comfortable in their conversation.
  • They were same as a pair of best friends and they invited another to drink beer.
  • When the American caught some crab, he took them into the basket and put the lid on.
  • And he was surprise when he saw the Vietnamese pour the crabs into his basket but he didn’t put the lid on.
  • An hour later, the American asked the Vietnamese: - Why don’t you put the lid on after pour the crabs into?
  • The Vietnamese kept silent in some seconds and said: - This basket made in Vietnam.
  • Just in Vietnam, they can make this kind of basket.
  • All kind of crabs as American crabs when pour into this basket, they will become Vietnamese crabs.
  • And when they become Vietnamese crabs, they will look after each others.
  • Which crab climb up, another crabs will automatically pull down.
  • Do you understand?

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