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My Favorite Band
Hi friends! How are you?
I hope that you are fine.
Today I am going to talk about my favorite band, I like the punk rock and Green Day.
Green day is an American band ,which was founded in 1986 by the american singer Billie Joe Armstrong.
My favorite song of this band is American Idiot, because of this song talks about government of George Bush and which is a terrible president Bye friends

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- Hi friends! How are you?
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- I hope that you are fine.
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- Today I am going to talk about my favorite band, I like the punk rock and Green Day.
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- Green day is an American band ,which was founded in 1986 by the american singer Billie Joe Armstrong.
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- My favorite song of this band is American Idiot, because of this song talks about government of George Bush and which is a terrible president Bye friends
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