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  • Trip conclusion

  • First of all, I would finalize my travel with a little conclusion.
  • Actually, throw my trips in Netherlands, I have constated that this country and France are very different.
  • Indeed, things like food, weather are points that mark me when I discovered them.
  • But these things, that we can see at first sight are details comparing lessons you might learn if u take the time with netherlands people.
  • Despite all the good things that I saw doing sightseeing tour, things I learn from firemen, I would never forget values that netherlands people teached me.
  • That’s to say, thanks to daily contact with them, I realized important thing that I would have never realized if I hadn’t gone over there. .
  • For instance, when I was at my penpal's place, his friend came into the house and help hiself without asking, he took a tea and a cup in the cupboard – I remember being chocked because any French people would have dared to do that.
  • Netherlands people are very honest with each other, and God, you cannot imagine how it simplify things.
  • In France, if you don’t want to go at friends’ home you will look for an excuse whereas in Netherlands, you will simply tell that you don’t want to go today.
  • Moreover, they have a certain authenticity in their mentality: they know how to take the time to chill, or just to spend some time in family.
  • For exemple, lots of Netherlands family are still praying before lunch.
  • Comparing to Parisian life, I think that Netherlands people’s mind is based on hopefulness, trust, honesty, and I’m glad to say that today, I know the real meaning of these words thanks to my trips.

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    • But these things, that we can see at first sight are details comparing lessons you might learn if u take the time with netherlands people.
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    • Despite all the good things that I saw doing sightseeing tour, things I learn from firemen, I would never forget values that netherlands people teached me.
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    • That’s to say, thanks to daily contact with them, I realized important thing that I would have never realized if I hadn’t gone over there. .
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    • For instance, when I was at my penpal's place, his friend came into the house and help hiself without asking, he took a tea and a cup in the cupboard – I remember being chocked because any French people would have dared to do that.
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    • In France, if you don’t want to go at friends’ home you will look for an excuse whereas in Netherlands, you will simply tell that you don’t want to go today.
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    • Moreover, they have a certain authenticity in their mentality: they know how to take the time to chill, or just to spend some time in family.
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    • Comparing to Parisian life, I think that Netherlands people’s mind is based on hopefulness, trust, honesty, and I’m glad to say that today, I know the real meaning of these words thanks to my trips.
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