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  • Check my opinion essay

  • Theme:Technical progress is always harmful for the environment In our world some people suppose that technical progress is an evident evil for nature.
  • Others,however, think that devil is not as black as he is painted and technical progress even does do good our environment.So,who is right?
  • In my judgment,modern technologies are not so harmful for nature as they seem.
  • Firstly,scientists create modern methods of recycling waste.
  • It goes without saying that such technologies are really good for our Mother Nature.
  • Secondly, there appear new cars, laptops and other things that have low energy consumption.
  • However, there are people who believe that technical progress is an threat to nature because its fruits pollute air ,water and soil.
  • But as I can say scientists create special equipment which can reduce any kind of pollution.
  • These pieces of equipment are chiefly used in plants and factories and it helps to make our air, water and soil cleaner.
  • To draw a conclusion,I must say that technical progress is really good for environment as science does not still and create technologies preserving our planet for future generations.
  • People ,who do not think so ,are just unaware of the modern technologies.

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