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  • When I was 8 or 9 years old, I remembered sometimes, my mom made burning bread.
  • One day, she was very tired after a long day.
  • She made dinner for my father and me.
  • She made some burning bread but they were black as same as coal.
  • My father ate them and asked me about my day at school.
  • My mother apologied my father about the bread.
  • My dad said: “ Oh, I like burning bread.
  • “ Afterthat, my dad told to me: “ Your mom worked very hard all the day and she was very tired.
  • A loaf of burning bread didn’t harm anyone but the bitter reproach that we say can make a pain in hurt of everyone.
  • In the life, there are many things and they aren’t perfect and some people aren’t perfect.
  • I was bad in some work.
  • Past many months, years, I learnt how to accept other people's mistakes and choose to support their differences.
  • That is the best important keys to make a relationship healthy, growth and sustainable.
  • The life is very short to wake up with the bad news.
  • Love the people who were very good with you and Please sympathize with those who have not done it now.” In the life, you must learn how to sympathy for the weaknesses and limitations of the others.
  • Sympathy with life, personality of everyone in the family, friends, couples ... will help you reconcile a life around.
  • Empathy - the secret family foster happiness.
  • This is a lesson in empathy between people and people

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