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Text from Juliya1235 - English

  • Friends

  • Friends should always be together and share everything.
  • To what extent do you agree?
  • It is a common knowledge that friends should have private time and social life from each other.
  • Sometimes they spend all time together what leads to break up.
  • Mates can prevent the spit.
  • Friends do not have 100% of their time together.
  • Real fellows should be understanding and respect each other's private life and personal space.
  • If you take all your friend's time, you will start to get jealous of other's social life, try to control him and you will be able to lose your mate.
  • On the other hand: real friend must always helps you, when you to be in difficult situation.
  • My mate does not always agree with me but he always be at my side.
  • I amsure that all of my friends are ready to help me in all time.
  • By way of conclusion, I would like to say that everybody wants tohave a true and faithful friend, but not all lucky enough to get one.
  • If you get that lucky, you have to work hard to support this relationship.
  • To thanks friendship, people study respect private life of other people and be tolerant and intelligent.
  • You should give your friends all the freedom they need, but being there for them when they get trouble.

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