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Please correct this text for me. Thank you so much.
You see, love of the dad is very huge.
It's the faith of his daughter.
That love is the promise of the dad too.
In life, our parents love us so much.
We didn't know how love do our parents give for us till we become parents.
Please don't make your parents worry or sad.

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- Please correct this text for me. Thank you so much.
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- You see, love of the dad is very huge.
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문장 2
- It's the faith of his daughter.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- That love is the promise of the dad too.
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문장 4
- In life, our parents love us so much.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
문장 5
- We didn't know how love do our parents give for us till we become parents.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
문장 6
- Please don't make your parents worry or sad.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 6