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  • Don Arden

  • He was a stand-up comedy when he was only 13 during the war years.
  • Due to his jewish origin he started his new career by organizing hebrew folks competitions.
  • The in the '60s he organized british tours for american singers or groups such as The Small Faces ( who gave him a lot of support ) or Bo Diddley .
  • Don Arden started having serious problems with Ozzy Osbourne in 1979 who had drugs and alcohol problems .
  • Arden's daughter , Sharon , began to date him and Do Arden tried his best to split them up but he failed .
  • After this , his business began to have some economical and management problems and thanks to his daughter's business he continued to live his life without getting poorer.

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    • The in the '60s he organized british tours for american singers or groups such as The Small Faces ( who gave him a lot of support ) or Bo Diddley .
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    • Don Arden started having serious problems with Ozzy Osbourne in 1979 who had drugs and alcohol problems .
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    • Arden's daughter , Sharon , began to date him and Do Arden tried his best to split them up but he failed .
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    • After this , his business began to have some economical and management problems and thanks to his daughter's business he continued to live his life without getting poorer.
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