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  • Urgence à corriger anglais !! merci

  • https://jack35.wordpress.com/2014/07/14/40-campagnes-publicitaires-chocs-qui-changeront-votre-vision-du-monde-galerie/32-39/ Training task ( english) This picture is an advertising which proven an act.
  • It was publishing by CRS which exactly signified “Crisis Reliefs Singapore “.
  • This humanitarian organization it’s here in order to alert the general public to problem.
  • In the middle, we can see a crouching woman who holds a young boy in her arms.
  • She looks like very sad because we can notice that his child maybe dying.
  • Probably there are poor peoples as their clothes are miserable.
  • The woman wears a veil white and grey with motifs on her head and a grey dress.
  • The boy wears a grey t-shirt and a white dirty short.
  • Around them, in the bottom left-hand corner, in the top left-hand corner And On the left-hand side and on the other side we can make out different arms that raise their thumbs.
  • Thumbs up corresponds to the logo on the social media, Facebook.
  • On the left-hand side in font of thumbs up is writing “Liking isn’t helping” this sentence it’s the slogan.
  • This shows that ours society is creating a generation that is very self-centered.
  • Then, on the one hand we can imagine that these two persons are in the street because in the top left-hand corner there is a fence.
  • And At the top and in the top right-hand corner there is a wall.
  • The logo on this ad is located in the bottom right-hand corner of the picture.
  • I find this advertisement is attractive, creative because I find it original by the fact that the artist has represents something which is totally true.
  • I feel a bit ashamed of myself because I think I am one of the people who love.
  • So really for me this ad it’s very artistic: Black and white was not randomly selected I think.
  • I t's elaborate and flexible there are one implicit and explicit meaning: The poverty and the egocentric peoples.
  • I choose this picture and not another because I find that it’s so touching.
  • Thanks for listening to me.

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