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  • Diary

  • Last Saturday, I took my school report card.
  • In that morning, I felt pounding in my heart.
  • It was a scare day for me, even for all of students.
  • I waited my parents back and took my school report.
  • It's been a long time, then my parents home.
  • With their happy face, they gave it to me.
  • Then I opened it slowly.
  • I looked all with sadly face at first.
  • But, finally I felt shock, happy, they all mixed once.
  • I got A for all subject, there is no B.
  • Now, I am very happy because of it.
  • I promise, I will study hard to keep it even raise higher mark. Thank God.

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