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Traveling to Jakarta (1)
On this holiday, my family had a plan for visiting Jakarta.
All needed things had been prepared last night.
We left house at night while people was sleeping.
It took many hours to arrive at Jakarta.
Sometimes we stopped at the rest area for some minutes before we continued our trip.
And finally, we arrived at Jakarta in the morning.
Before we went around Jakarta, we visited our big families' houses.
At last, we continued went off surrounding Monas and entering it walked around there.
And now, we are visiting my father's office for about his business things in a city of Jakarta.

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- On this holiday, my family had a plan for visiting Jakarta.
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句子 2
- All needed things had been prepared last night.
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句子 3
- We left house at night while people was sleeping.
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句子 4
- It took many hours to arrive at Jakarta.
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句子 5
- Sometimes we stopped at the rest area for some minutes before we continued our trip.
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句子 6
- And finally, we arrived at Jakarta in the morning.
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句子 7
- Before we went around Jakarta, we visited our big families' houses.
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句子 8
- At last, we continued went off surrounding Monas and entering it walked around there.
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句子 9
- And now, we are visiting my father's office for about his business things in a city of Jakarta.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9