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  • Coming of age in the East

  • I am supposed to tell you about coming age in the East.
  • Everybody heard that people in the East countries live much longer that people in other places.
  • However, do we know something about it exactly?
  • We often use words age and old or older but what do we really mean by these words?
  • For me for example, word old means somebody who is over 50 or 60 years old.
  • But the definition of this word in Europe does not match the same one in Asian countries.
  • First, it should be said that East age reckoning system is different from the one in Europe.
  • The first year of life is counted as one instead of zero so that a person is one year old in their first year, two years old in their second and so on.
  • Following this system, people may be one or two years older in the East than in other places of the world.
  • And now I would like to talk about the oldest people in the East.
  • From the university course of the geography, we know that only in Japan there are more than 10 thousand people over 100 years!
  • Just think a bit about this number.
  • Do you know many people reached 100 years?
  • Moreover, the average age in Japan approximately equals to 46 years.
  • For reference, Russian middle age equals to 37 years.
  • You can also find many old people in another part of the East.
  • In Taiwan today live about 1,5 thousand people over 110 years.
  • It really is amazing!
  • Japan and Korea are in the lead of amount of long-livers.
  • But it has its own disadvantages.
  • In 20 years a number of retirees will achieve about 40% of the population.
  • It would be very dangerous for their economics and the common future.
  • Many government employees are worried about this problem, but today nobody knows what the way of solving the problem is the best one.
  • We can only predict how these countries will look like.

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