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today is very cool
Hi everybody. my name is Giang.
I'm 21 year old ^^ this is the first time i participate in this club. i need someone teach me English, and i will help you learn Vietnamese

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- today is very cool
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi everybody. my name is Giang.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm 21 year old ^^ this is the first time i participate in this club. i need someone teach me English, and i will help you learn Vietnamese
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2