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  • Ha Giang

  • If you asked me “Why do you like travel?”, I could answer that “ I want to take a rest , relax and get rid of troubles” before and I don’t want to come back to my real life.
  • It’s too tired.
  • But I had a change of heart after my trip to Ha Giang.
  • Ha Giang is a poor province with minority groups in the north of Vietnam.
  • There are many children with the age of about 12, who don’t go to school.
  • They have to work in farm, so as to help parents and they are skinny and slovenly, but when I look at them, I always see the happiness on their face.
  • I drove up the northernmost of the country by motorbike, more and more I saw, the mountains is very imposing.
  • But that is why the life is so difficult here.
  • I lived with them 2 days and 1 night in there and I realized that the happiness is very simple.
  • Their lives don’t have material wealth; position in society… but it has their way to enjoy life.
  • Now, I slow down and enjoy life.
  • I often go to visit remote areas with my friend by motorbike; take those photos of natural, enjoy local cuisine and learn about their culture.

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