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A park that I've never visited
On my way home, I found a park that I've never visited.
It's located under the big bridge.
It looks good to study because there are some tables and chair.
In addition to it, May be I can study in the shade even in the evening.
I will go there next holiday.

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- On my way home, I found a park that I've never visited.
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- It's located under the big bridge.
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- It looks good to study because there are some tables and chair.
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- In addition to it, May be I can study in the shade even in the evening.
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- I will go there next holiday.
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