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Mi little tale
I was in my office when she appears slowly in the door.
She was wearing a white dress decorated with flowes.
She gave me a sweet smile and then took my hand.

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- Mi little tale
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句子 1
- I was in my office when she appears slowly in the door.
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句子 2
- She was wearing a white dress decorated with flowes.
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句子 3
- She gave me a sweet smile and then took my hand.
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