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  • Hello i'm Alejandro , and i'm going to talk about this day, at the first i got up earlier because i didn't want stay more in the bed then i had a shower for start the day with energy after the shower i had breakfast i ate a cup of coffe with toasts, was very delicious...
  • After that i was chatting with some friends in whats app because i wanted go to the mall for buy a T shirt because my favourite t shirt was destroyed by the washing machine, i mean the t shirt was more small but finally we didn't go to the mall . we went to my friend's house where we were playing some videogames was pretty fun and i had lunch there too we ate pizza and was fantastic.
  • When we end eatting we play a little bit more then we go out to the park for play basketball but suddenly started to rain and we had to go quickly but we were waitting if the rain would stopped we could play but this wasn't the case . we comeback to my friend's house and we were talking about our favourites films . after i had to back to my had to back to my home where i had dinner and then i watched a very bad film but there were another interesting thing on the TV when the film end i went to the bed and in this right moment i cant sleep and i'm trying to practice and improve my english:)

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    • Hello i'm Alejandro , and i'm going to talk about this day, at the first i got up earlier because i didn't want stay more in the bed then i had a shower for start the day with energy after the shower i had breakfast i ate a cup of coffe with toasts, was very delicious...
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    • After that i was chatting with some friends in whats app because i wanted go to the mall for buy a T shirt because my favourite t shirt was destroyed by the washing machine, i mean the t shirt was more small but finally we didn't go to the mall . we went to my friend's house where we were playing some videogames was pretty fun and i had lunch there too we ate pizza and was fantastic.
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    • When we end eatting we play a little bit more then we go out to the park for play basketball but suddenly started to rain and we had to go quickly but we were waitting if the rain would stopped we could play but this wasn't the case . we comeback to my friend's house and we were talking about our favourites films . after i had to back to my had to back to my home where i had dinner and then i watched a very bad film but there were another interesting thing on the TV when the film end i went to the bed and in this right moment i cant sleep and i'm trying to practice and improve my english:)
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