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  • Please help me to correct this story. Thank you so much.

  • Once upon a time, there was a king.
  • He hold a contest to find an artist can draw a peaceful picture.
  • Many artists drew and waited for the result from the king.
  • The king looked for all the picture and he chose 2 pictures in all of them.
  • But he must to choose the best peaceful picture.
  • In the first picture, there was a peaceful lake.
  • He could see some mountains reflected in the lake.
  • The blue sky with white clouds.
  • Everyone looked at that picture and they loved it.
  • In the second picture, There was a big mountains.
  • The sky was as grey as a storm.
  • Under the mountains was a waterfall.
  • But when the king looked carefully, he saw a big bird doing a nest.
  • It sat peaceful in the nest.
  • What was the picture did the king choose?
  • He chose the second picture and said: “Because peaceful isn’t mean you live in a place didn’t have noise and problems.
  • Peaceful means live between all of them, you still feel peaceful in your heart.
  • That is the true peaceful.”

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