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Hello, my name is Andres, I´m 22 years old, I´m from Bogota, Colombia, I study electronic engineering, I´m going to graduate as engineer this year, I live in Bogota with my family, I have two brothers, Santiago and Nicolas, they are 11 and 7 years old respectively, I´m working in a call center about mobile network in my city, I want to learn english and other languages because I would like to travel to other countries and know other cultures.