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Let's get acquainted!
My name is Valerya (for friends - Lera) I'm from Siberia (Russian Federation) I live in Altai region.
I am 20 years old.
I'm a third year student and study in College of culture.
I love to read and walk to the theater.
My favorite books is "Gone With the Wind" and "The Catcher in the Rye".
What do you love?
I would really like to find English-speaking friends.
I will be glad to meet you :)

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- Let's get acquainted!
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- My name is Valerya (for friends - Lera) I'm from Siberia (Russian Federation) I live in Altai region.
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- I am 20 years old.
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- I'm a third year student and study in College of culture.
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- I love to read and walk to the theater.
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- My favorite books is "Gone With the Wind" and "The Catcher in the Rye".
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- What do you love?
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- I would really like to find English-speaking friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
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- I will be glad to meet you :)
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8