批改

Hello, please help me correct this small story) In 2010 I graduated from high school and take their final exams, then i entered the Moscow State University.

Since I was born and raised in Tula, in Moscow there was no place to live and universities provide hostel for nonresident students.

Usually students lived in the room 3-4 people, but in my there were as many as five people.

This created a lot of noise and other discomfort for life.

After 3 years, I decided to move to a separate room.

For this purpose I have come to the officer of administration and the head of a student organization, we had already done joint projects on employment of students during the summer months.

I needed his help and support.

And I managed to convince him, was the most important thing - to convince the head of the Department of hostels.

I wrote him a letter of motivation with all the advances and opportunities that I have realized in the University after moving to a separate room.

In the end he agreed and I was able to live in a separate room.