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The USA , my dream.
I would like live in the USA , more particularly the state of Florida because I'd like went to Miami.
This city is most beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
I would like went there with my boyfriend , it's our dream.
But I do improve my english so i will go in a few years.

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- I would like live in the USA , more particularly the state of Florida because I'd like went to Miami.
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- This city is most beautiful , with the beach and the ocean.
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- I would like went there with my boyfriend , it's our dream.
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- But I do improve my english so i will go in a few years.
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